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Monday 2 September 2019

Essay Pre-planning



  • My key event is going to be the cheater when Zelie got to see her mum.
  • My important character is going to be Zelie.
  • My character changed from being soft, lost and no self-esteem to being strong and courageous .

The incident of Zelie finally getting to see her mum again after a long time. "Mama?" Zelie says. "Hello my little Zel" Mama says. "I thought you were gone" Zelie says.

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